On this page you will learn that exactly the same arguments can be
used in essays that have opposite conclusions. But the arguments must
be marked differently. Arguments that support the writer's main conclusion
are presented as facts or as non-debatable statements. Arguments that
oppose the writer's main conclusion will be marked with problematising
phrases so that they appear debatable and possibly untrue.
The paragraphs are not complete texts. They are paragraphs from larger
essays on the issue of whether Australia should become a republic.
Therefore the main conclusion of each is not explicitly stated. It
would be explicitly stated in the introduction to the essays from which
the paragraphs were extracted.
The topic of the paragraphs is how the issue of the republic is related
to the questions of immigration and national identity. They both describe
the same arguments but have opposite conclusions.
Task Read each passage carefully. Choose the correct
main conclusion for each passage. (Remember to look carefully for
statements with problematising phrases and for the
connective "However" which marks the shift from the opposing
arguments to the arguments which support the writer's main
conclusion. It would be a good idea to print the page out
and circle these phrases and connectives).
Paragraph 1
Jacobsen (1992) argues that Australia does not
need a republic to build a sense of national
identity because we already have one. It is claimed
that three quarters of our population is still
Anglo-Celtic. According to this argument, if people
want to migrate here they have to accept
Australia's traditions and its way of life. Other
countries, so this argument goes, do not feel that
they have to change their constitution just because
they accept immigrants from different cultures.
However, as Smith (1993) explains, Australia must
develop a new cultural identity to reflect its
diverse and multicultural population. Australia is
no longer a nation of British and Irish people. Its
citizens come from a huge variety of different
ethnic and cultural backgrounds. It is claimed that
if Australia was a republic it would give our
migrants a stronger sense of belonging. Moreover,
we would not be turning our back on our
Anglo-centered past if we became a republic because
we could still stay on as a member of the
Commonwealth of Nations.
What is the author's main conclusion? (NOTE: The boxes below are not clickable. They're just boxes.)
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Australia should become a republic
Australia should remain a constitutional
monarchy
Paragraph 2
Smith (1993) asserts that Australia must develop
a new cultural identity to reflect its diverse and
multicultural population. According to this
argument, Australia is no longer a nation of
British and Irish people. Its citizens come from a
huge variety of different ethnic and cultural
backgrounds. It is claimed that if Australia was a
republic it would give our migrants a stronger
sense of belonging. This position goes on to argue
that we would not be turning our back on our
Anglo-centered past if we became a republic because
we could still stay on as a member of the
Commonwealth of Nations. However, as Jacobsen
(1992) states, Australia does not need a republic
to build a sense of national identity because we
already have one. Moreover, three quarters of our
population is still Anglo-Celtic. Furthermore, if
people want to migrate here they have to accept
Australia's traditions and its way of life. In
addition, other countries do not feel that they
have to change their constitution just because they
accept immigrants from different cultures.